Thursday, July 22, 2010

Santos













 "Very Cool"

I think it is very cool

very cool how clouds start 
how they start very small 
and get bigger as if being stretched in the sky

very cool how they gather water
very cool how they move up the mountain 
and wrap themselves around the mountains

very cool how they sprinkle water over the plants
like the woman that takes care of her flower garden

and then disappear like a man 
that has had a good life 
and has no worries of what he leaves behind

I think it is very cool.

Meet the Author:

Hi, my name is Santos. I was born in Los Angeles, California. I don'tremember much, but I hope to go back some day. I don't like to read and write.  When I really need to, then I will. I wish to graduate on time so I can get a better job and make money. I also would like to travel to a lot of different countries

1 comment:

  1. Santos, this piece really went through a transformation. This final draft is really good. Nice work!

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