"Very Cool"
I think it is very cool
very cool how clouds start
how they start very small
and get bigger as if being stretched in the sky
very cool how they gather water
very cool how they move up the mountain
and wrap themselves around the mountains
very cool how they sprinkle water over the plants
like the woman that takes care of her flower garden
and then disappear like a man
that has had a good life
and has no worries of what he leaves behind
I think it is very cool.
Meet the Author:
Hi, my name is Santos. I was born in Los Angeles, California. I don'tremember much, but I hope to go back some day. I don't like to read and write. When I really need to, then I will. I wish to graduate on time so I can get a better job and make money. I also would like to travel to a lot of different countries

Santos, this piece really went through a transformation. This final draft is really good. Nice work!
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